Monday, April 20, 2020
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Hi Karaitiana
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing story, I love your use of onomatopoeia, especially at the start to really set the scene. The way you describe things really puts a picture in my head of what is happening in your story. I am curious to know, though, how there could be a fire burning at the bottom of the sea?
HI Petra,thanks for the comment.When I saw this picture I was confused about the fire as well.But then I thought HES MAGIC! or just a glass cover over the fire.I'm not to sure.But it could be whatever.I got the picture from pobble.
ReplyDeleteStay Safe
Karaitiana