Winnie the pooh.....

 Hey guys! This term for writing we are focusing on narratives! My narrative is combining Winnie the pooh and Humpty Dumpty. The first thing we had to do was plan what our stories were gonna be about. 

1. Setting

2. Characters

3.Feelings

4.Build up

5. Problem

6.Solution

Then we could actually start writing. Here is my writing, I worked really hard on it and I would LOVE it if you gave me feedback. Enjoy!

Once upon a time, Winnie the Pooh and his friends sat on a cherry red, brick wall laughing at each other's dad jokes. Quite far away, Humpty Dumpty was singing, dancing, eating honey and living his best life. Winnie started posing on the crimson wall with his cool friends outside of the dazzling mansion. Meanwhile, Humpty was dancing in the dimed Hundred Acre Wood. When Winnie talked, he had the most cheerful attitude. His pitch black eyes twinkle in the sunlight.

By the brilliant castle, Winnie and his fragile friends felt wind gently blowing on their soft and woolly backs. Unknown to them, a tornado was brewing and concocting in the distance…

BAM! BOOM! POW! The enraged tornado knocked the frail Winnie the pooh and his delicate friends off the apple red wall. The furious tornado forced a storming and rapid sneeze to come from within. They were feeling sore, regretful and hurt. The animals bonked their fuzzy heads on the rough concrete floor.

Far far away from the stunning castle, in Hundred Acre Wood, Humpty, the honey lover, ran out of his saffron coloured honey. So, he decided that he would ask the grouchy and greedy king. He strolled down the hill reciting his speech for his beloved honey. When he finally reached his destination he saw a couple of animals painfully lying on the ground. He called and signalled the guards that some animals were in a terrible accident. They were swiftly rushed to the hospital, given medicine and bandages. After 48 hours they were healed and blissful.

Finally, Winnie and his friends were let out of hospital, they all hiked back to Hundred Acre Wood with fears of walls. Humpty tried to warn them. They all get that joyful, cheerful and happy feeling in their stomach. They were meant to be friends forever. In the end, Winnie, Humpty and all their friends lived 

Happily Ever After.

Moral: DO NOT SIT ON WALLS ALONE OR WITH YOUR FRIENDS!

Have you ever been to the hospital? If you have comment why you were there. If you haven't then you are lucky! Please give me some feedback.

Have a nice day

Karaitiana