EA
3/07/19
I rate this text a…
9 because…
I found it really funny how Polly caught a fish and Josh(The Writer)said he would catch Kahawai and caught NOTHING!Another reason for my nine is this story has a lot of cool new words I didn’t know.I knew some though.Also because it has a couple of adjectives.That is why I rated this text a 9-10.
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Ending:Polly has to put the spotty back into the water so he/her can be with her family.
MY ending!:Polly gets to keep the fish but the fish isn’t a spotty it’s a...KAHAWAI!!!Josh gets really annoyed and jealous because he caught NOTHING!The Kahawai had a nice home in a sweet little homey fish tank.
ANA
2/07/19
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Polly catches a fish.Josh has a NEW BETTER fishing rod.
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Polly has to put the fish back into the water.They DON’T catch any fish.
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They watch the Ferry glide past.When the Writer flicks his line out it makes a whirring
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What am I???
I can be bought.
I am useful.
I can be used.
I come in colours.
Sometimes people use me to store things.
I am usually used on the beach.
BOUNS(If you don’t know)
I had water and a little spotty in me.
KA
Dad
Polly(Little sister)
The writer(Josh)
Campbell(Cousin)
CB
Harbour:A place in the coast where boats,wharfs and water including land is.:
Wharf:A deck where people go to fish or see the water up close.:
Swivel:A part that joins two parts together.?:
Ferry:A type of boat:
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It's a Sunday Morning and Dad,Polly,The writerJosh) and Campbell went to go fishing in The Parade.
When they all park The writer(Josh)pulls out his NEW fishing hook and starts teasing Polly and then talks about the Tackle Box.
He flicks out his rod and then POLLY starts to tease The Writer(Josh)about how he hasn’t caught anything.
They watch the Ferry glide in the harbour like a GIANT then...look at their buckets and are disappointed.
Polly CATCHES A FISH!!!But she has to put in back into the sea because its to small and bony to eat.
Hi KK its me Sapphire i like how you added the cool pictures next time you could mabby put in a little bit more information but out of all i love this
ReplyDeletehi kk im just telling you this maybe you could check your grammar on morning
ReplyDeleteSO COOOOLLL
ReplyDeleteSinning out by Sapphire