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Thursday, July 4, 2019

Minnie Mouse description

Hey guys,
I have made this descriptive writing about Minnie Mouse.
Hope you enjoy!!!

Minnie Mouse 
Minnie has a round face but her cheeks pop out a bit. Attached to her head at the top there are two round ears one on the left and one on the right.Between  her ears she has a big rose red bow.The outside of Minnie's face is black and the rest of her face is a peachy color. Minnie has oval eyes three little eyelashes on the side at the top of her eyes.She has  an oval twisted to the side for her nose.Minnie has a big friendly smile in the middle of her smile it is opened a little bit and of her mouth is closed.

Please give me some feedback and tell me what you think of this piece of writing.
Thanks for reading!!!



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