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Friday, November 26, 2021

Tammy´s writing!

Hey guys! This year Ruru and Kōtuku ( Year 2 ) have been doing buddy reading together. This week my buddy, Tammy, has written a story about her weekend. It sounds like she had a lot of fun. I wish I was there with her!! Here is her amazing and spectacular writing.


I went to the museum and I saw a big rock and then I went to go see an air plane, It was a great day in the museum.

What was you favourite thing about her writing? She would really like to know! 

Thanks for reading Tammy´s story and make sure to leave some feedback :)

Have a good day
Karaitiana

2 comments:

  1. Hi Karaitiana and Tammy,
    We (Tiffany and Jaydah)love your story. Our favourite part is the big rock. What colour is the rock?
    Have a good rest of your day

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    1. Hi Jaydah and Tiffany,
      the rock was a dark blue! Thanks for reading Tammys story.
      From Karaitiana and Tammy :)

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