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Monday, May 4, 2020

The Circus

Hello viewers,
Today I have done some writing.It is about a circus.IN this story there are 3 acts.I hope they interest you. This took me about 3 or 2 minutes to write and decorate.I hope you like reading my story.
Here it is:
The Circus

 Have you ever been to a circus? IF you  have comment what circus and your favourite act they did.I have been to a circus.I went to the "Zirka Circus".My favourite act was either the clown,Motorbikes or the contortion.I hope you liked this.
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Karaitiana
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7 comments:

  1. PetraMay 4, 2020 at 3:05 PM

    Hi Karaitiana
    Great descriptions of the circus my friend. I have been to a circus and I really enjoyed the motorcycle act. The clowns always make it funny. If you were in a circus what act would you like to be able to do?

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    1. KaraitianaMay 5, 2020 at 2:38 PM

      Hi Petra,thanks for the comment. If I were in a circus I would be able to be.. a...CLOWN!!! I asked my dad and he said ACROBAT! I'm not that sure if I could be an Acrobat But I would give it a go.

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    2. PetraMay 6, 2020 at 12:45 PM

      I agree with your Dad, I would like to be an acrobat too. They seem to be so elegant!

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  2. Mrs TabakMay 4, 2020 at 8:31 PM

    Hi Karaitiana
    Wow, What an amazing piece of writing, you really had me hook and I love your use of descriptive works and words that have emphasis on them. I have been to the circus, but not for many years. The circus I went to was mainly with animals, which is now quite sad to think about. Keep up the great work, and I look forward to seeing more.

    Mrs T

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    1. KaraitianaMay 5, 2020 at 2:40 PM

      Hi Mrs T, thanks for the comment.I hope I didn't make you feel to sad.I have been as you know to the Zirka Circus.I miss you and mum does to.
      Stay Safe

      Karaitiana

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  3. Mrs SnookMay 5, 2020 at 10:57 AM

    Hi Karaitiana
    Great piece of writing.
    No I have never been to a circus. Sounds like it would be an amazing thing to go and see.
    Mrs Snook

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    1. KaraitianaMay 5, 2020 at 5:38 PM

      Hi Mrs Snook,thanks for the comment.I think you would like the circus.It is really fun and they might have cotton candy.
      Stay Safe

      Karaitiana

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